Characters and plans

“No battle plan survives contact with the enemy.” – Helmuth von Moltk People in general do not do things completely at random. There may not be much conscious, deliberate planning involved in stumbling out of bed in the morning and getting the coffee or tea started, but

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Scene choreography part 2

This is a continuation of the pre-open-mic post on choreography. Last time, I was talking mostly about the macro level – the order things happen in the overall story. This week, I’m going to talk more about the scene level. Choreographing a scene starts with the things

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Macro scene choreography

Choreography is defined as “the art or practice of designing sequences of movements of physical bodies (or their depictions) in which motion, form, or both are specified.” It is most often applied to dance, but the term gets used for pretty much anything that involves a need

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Characters and complexity

One way and another, a lot of pixels get used talking about making “well-rounded” or complex characters. I put “well-rounded” in scare quotes because it always makes me think of the advice I got in high school about being well-rounded – take many kinds of classes, try

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Querying

Let’s talk about query letters for a minute. Specifically, let’s talk about the plot summary portion of a query letter. (Note: This post is going to have a bunch of spoilers for Mairelon the Magician, which I’m using as an example.) Query letters are conventionally limited to

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Post-Holiday Open Mic

Today is our regularly scheduled Open Mic, during which people can make announcements, wish belated holiday greetings, whinge about how their writing is going (or celebrate how well it is), complain about being stuck at home, or pretty much what you want. My announcement is that yesterday,

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Happy Holidays!

Sorry about the temporary outage – there was a technical glitch with the pointers (?) that it took my web people a while to figure out how to fix. This is the time of year that I generally take the weeks around Christmas and New Years off.

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