Transitions, Part 2 – Narrative

Narrative transitions are the second major way of getting characters from Scene A to Scene B. Instead of simply skipping a bunch of time or a change in location, a narrative transition briefly summarizes, describes, or explains whatever the author is skimming over lightly. Because narrative transitions

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Transition toolbox, part 1

In looking back over this blog after the last post, I realize that I haven’t ever explicitly dealt with scene-to-scene or chapter-end-to-chapter-beginning transitions – not all in one post, anyway. So here is that discussion. The first thing to look at is what changes between the end

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Transition scenes

Last week, Deep Lurker asked whether I still hate writing transitions. The answer is a qualified yes – qualified, because the question made me realize that this is one more place where writing terminology covers at least two kinds of thing, and they’re very different. Transition is

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There are no general answers

Most of my regular readers seem to have realized that the only “writing rules” I believe in are the ones that involve grammar, spelling, and punctuation – and that even those are flexible, if the writer needs to play with them to get a particular effect in

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Finding the end

If you’ve read the last couple of blog posts about my current WIP, you may have noticed that the end of the story started off as “Kayla confronts the Archmage. Kayla wins. Everybody celebrates.” This is actually more specific than the end of my first-stage outline normally

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Open Mic Day

This is the slightly belated Open Mic Day that would have happened last week if I hadn’t had a software malfunction that messed up the notification. I think that is sorted out now, so the next one will be six weeks after this. So, talk amongst yourselves

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WIP Story development, part 2

Last week, I talked about getting my plot outline up to a sketchy 1200 words. Usually, my plot outlines start off fairly specific (“Kayla is in the library with Harkawn, reviewing past Dark Lord grimoires. She is annoyed – what good is summoning a horde of mosquitoes?

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Literary Prophecies

Prophecies seem to have become a staple of fantasy literature. Most of them are either self-fulfilling prophecies, where the characters’ attempts to circumvent the prophecy are what makes it come true, or they are riddles – symbolic language or plays on words that are puzzles for the

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