September Open Mic

Once again, it is time to talk amongst yourselves while I deal with my current crop of household emergencies. (My water heater and a/c both sprang leaks in the same week…so it is a happy coincidence that this is Open Mic week! And yes, it will be

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Showing off vs. Showing up

Some thirty-plus years ago, shortly after I sold my second novel and was well on my way to writing my third, I met up with a college friend whom I hadn’t seen since graduation. We talked a bit about what we’d done; I mentioned that my first

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Plot, situation, and incident/event

A lot of writers stall at the very beginning of story construction – at the idea stage – because they have never thought about the difference between situations, incidents/events, and actual plot, much less how to move from any one of these to any of the others.

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Rolling along

“Rolling revising” is a writing term that I think is fairly clear, but I’ll take a whack at a quick definition: Instead of writing a complete first draft from start to finish, the writer periodically goes back over already-written parts and revises them before continuing, even though

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More on Beginnings

“Beginning: The point in time or space when something starts.” – Oxford languages. From that deceptively simple definition stems a lot of writerly misunderstanding. At a rough and very unscientific estimate, around 90% of the writing advice on beginnings talks about what belongs in the first few

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Micro-level bad habits

A lot of story analysis and critique starts by focusing on macro-level aspects of storytelling: characterization, narrative, worldbuilding, plot, and the ways one develops or reveals these things over the course of a novel. Ultimately, though, how one presents characterization, growth, personality, action, worldbuilding, plot, and everything

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